Main themes of the movie
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The global warming generated because
of us, human beings and our irresponsible way of live, without any conscience of
external costs of our consumerism
-
Future of the earth if we don’t
change the way that we are living today
-
Things that we can do to change
this probable future
Review of the video
The movie talks about a possible earth future
if we don’t stop the global warming now. Show us how earth will change year by
year, decade by decade since 2009 until 2100 narrating story of Lucy, a fiction
character that was born in 2009 in Miami, and survive this earth destruction.
At the beginning is all perfect for Lucy, had a
great family, a beautiful house, lived in a great city, all was normal. But one
day, at age of six years old, a tornado hit the coast of Miami and devastated
the city. This show us the beginning of earth changes because our way of live,
that we consider normal, but is an unhealthy way for the planet, a dirty way
that don’t take conscience of the consequences.
After this Lucy had to move to San Diego, but time
don’t stop, earth is dying and the Governments don’t agree to reduce their
greenhouse gas emissions, so food started to be a problem. So Lucy’s Father
gets a new job, he and his family moved to New York, a complete sustainable
city in that future. Were great times for Lucy, but only one sustainable city
is not enough to stop global warming. Temperatures increased 4°c, and the sea increased
too. Government tried to stop this throwing a gas to the atmosphere and it
worked, they cooled the earth but only for a short time. They only gets to
destroy ozone layer, and with this all human hope to return to this “gold” age.
But easy, we are on time to do something, fortunately
this is a fiction story, but we must act NOW!!!
Three facts that I consider important and wanna tell you my friend...
1. Governments have
to agree, all of us have to agree to stop this unsustainable way of live
2. Small changes
could do important things
3. We have to
take conscience of the cost of our acts for the planet
Fabian,
ResponderEliminarWC: 391.Too many words! Part of this task is synthesis. You need to stick to the number of words required, please. In this case, it was 300.
Please, check the following obs.
- The global warming generated because of us, human beings and our irresponsible way of livING, without any conscience of external costs of our consumerism
- Future of the Earth if we don’t change the way that we are living today
- Things that we can do to change this probable future
The movie talks about a possible Earth future if we don’t stop the global warming now. IT ShowS us how earth will change year by year, decade by decade since 2009 until 2100 narrating THE story of Lucy, a fiction character that was born in 2009 in Miami, and surviveS this Earth destruction.
At the beginning IT is all perfect for Lucy, had a great family, a beautiful house, lived in a great city, all was normal. But one day, at THE age of six (years old), a tornado hit the coast of Miami and devastated the city. This showS us the beginning of Earth changes because OF our way of liF(v)e, that we consider normal, but IT is an unhealthy way for the planet, a dirty way (that) AND WE (don’t take conscience) AREN’T AWARE of the consequences.
After this Lucy had to move to San Diego, but time (don’t) DOESN’T stop,THE Earth is dying and (the) Governments don’t agree to reduce their greenhouse gas emissions, so food started to be a problem. So Lucy’s Father gets a new job, he and his family moved to New York, a completeLY sustainable city in that future. THEY Were great times for Lucy, but only one sustainable city is not enough to stop global warming. Temperatures increased 4°c, and the sea LEVEL increased too. THE Government tried to stop this throwing a gas to the atmosphere and it worked, they cooled the Earth but only for a short time. They only GOT to destroy THE ozone layer, and with this all human hope to return to this “gold” age.
But easy, we are on time to do something, fortunately this is a fiction story, but we must act NOW!!!
1. Governments have to agree, all of us have to agree to stop this unsustainable way of live
2. Small changes could do important things
3. We have to BE AWARE (take conscience) of the cost of our acts for the planet
You have a point of view and express it. It's fine. But you do need to take care of your writing more, you need to edit your text more carefully.
Cheers,
JC